Double Page Spread Second Draft

 Since receiving feedback from my teacher, I decided to make my main feature a double page spread, including an introduction onto the model who is writing the article as well as introduce the vintage theme & fashion. In my opinion a double page spread works a lot better, because it is a main feature it should include a lot of information, and my first draft did not. It looks a lot more professional and something that you would see in my inspirational texts such as Company. I chose to combine two different pages that are seen in Company magazine, a fashion related article, along with a page advertising clothes. It works really well together and all of the text fit in and will appeal to my target audience as it makes a lot of references to the North East, and the best shops to purchase the vintage styles. Overall, I am satisfied with this layout because it works a lot better then the previous draft, I have included relevant information that will appeal to my target audience and I have followed typical conventions that you would expect to see on a double page spread as well as challenge certain aspects and develop them further. I now plan on getting audience feedback to see what my target audience think of this page and if anything needs improving.