After taking into consideration the feedback that I received from my teacher I have since changed certain aspects of my magazine front cover to improve it's appearance and make it look more professional. I have dropped the word 'time' from one of the sub sell lines which has made the text fit in better and look more structured to fit around the main image, I have also added more colour by putting the 'vintage buys' sell line in pastel blue, because the background is in black & white it stands out a lot more however I am now going to experiment with adding more colour because it seems slightly dull. I have now followed conventions from real media products by adding an issue number, this is seen in most magazine products and gives my magazine a professional and realistic touch. After changing my magazine slightly it has given me more thoughts on how it could be improved, I would now like to experiment with different fonts as well as adding more colour. I really like how my front cover is turning out so far, it shows a good, clear representation of women which will make it appealing to my teenage target audience. I have also included sell lines that indicate it is a regional magazine, it is aimed towards teenage girls in the North East so seeing their hometown on my front cover will more than likely be appealing to them.

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