I have since decided to make a small change to my main article, in my opinion in my second draft the text needing separating to make it look more appealing to my target audience, therefore I have moved the position of the photograph so it is in between paragraphs. In my opinion this works better and will appeal more to my young target audience as the writing doesn't seem as chunky and as much to read. I have also changed the positioning of the photographers and models name, so they are going downwards, following a typical convention that is seen in most magazine articles.
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